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Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

0 posted 2001-07-25 10:49 PM

When I close my eyes,
I see you there.
I wish I could touch you,
Run my fingers through your hair.

But it's like a fantasy,
Only a dream.
You completely ignore me,
Block me out it seems.

I wish you could see,
All the love I have to share.
But then I open my eyes,
And you're not there.

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-25 10:52 PM

Let me be the first to welcome you to PIP!! I don't know any fancy html tricks so my greeting is a little less flashy than everyone else's.

Fabulous first post by the way. I liked how it came full circle in the end. Good job

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-25 10:57 PM

WELCOME!

I liked this very much

great first post

will watch out for more from you

~SEA

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

3 posted 2001-07-25 11:19 PM

I liked this! great first post and welcome to passions! cant wait to see more!

story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-07-26 12:33 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!

Hi!

I'll be on the look out for more of your poetry. A lil tip: If ya want alot of replies- You should reply to other people's poetry as well. (Yes, people notice.

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ANYWAY! Nice first post. I know what you mean- Liking people and they just don't even notice at all...and yet all you can do is think of them. Enjoyed the read. Keep posting

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-26 03:22 AM

Well done on this one! Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this very much! I hope to see you post more in the future.

Check your e-mail for a special message!
Dopey_Dope/Moderator

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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Words_of_Glitter
Member

since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

6 posted 2001-07-26 12:55 PM

HELLO AND WELCOME! Thought your first post and great! You didn't write a long @ss post...you made it short and simple and I thought it rocked. Can't wait to read more from ya!

"Time really does fly by and no one knows where it goes, so if you have something to say or do, say or do it now."

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

7 posted 2001-07-26 01:30 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-07-26 06:22 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...

wonderful first post...nice flow...and the last stanza was my fav and hit me home...great job!...as i hope to see you read, share and reply...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

9 posted 2001-07-27 05:49 AM

But then I open my eyes,
And you're not there.

this is sad but nice at the same time...i liked this poem a lot.....welcome to the wonderful world of passions punk!!!

"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love
Send a smile over to you"
Disarm
Smashing Pumkins

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

10 posted 2001-07-27 04:37 PM

.......welcome my friend.....sad first post but a good one......

u know my life is bad 2!!
~sabriel

stupidity should be painful
all i wanted out of u , was for sumthing u could never be, now take a real good look at what u've done 2 me!!!!!~slipknot

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2001-07-27 05:51 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Your poem was so sad and it was a great first post to start off with. It was short, simple and very to the point. That person is missing out on a lot not to notice what u have to share...good job!! Keep em coming and i cant wait to see more from you!

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

12 posted 2001-07-28 03:14 AM

WELCOME!!

really enjoyed your post too

ALLIE

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

13 posted 2001-07-28 05:49 PM

Welcome! I hope you like it here! Great first post! I like the last stanza, made a strong impact on me. Hope to see more of your work!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

14 posted 2001-08-03 12:10 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Very nice first post.. strong in emotions! Nice descriptions, I enjoyed this. I hope tos ee more posts and replies from you soon!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

luckyducky_505
Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

15 posted 2001-08-03 12:24 PM

I liked this poem. I'm relating to it very well right now! I'm not an awesome writer but I wanna ask if you'll please read my latest post ~ Dream Weaver ~

I really loving posting my poetry here because everybody is sooo nice when telling me about it.

Your as good as you make yourself out to be!!

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