Teen Poetry #5 |
Letter To Nobody |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dear Nobody, hope your life is better than mine. I hope you've been having a good time. A better time than me. Dear Nobody, am I a nobody too? am I just like you? or am I different. Dear Nobody, I shouldn't feel this way. Living just for today, and never tomorrow. Dear Nobody, Can you save me now? Find a way somehow, to make it go away. Dear Nobody, am I a nobody too? Am I just like you? or am I a somebody? Dear Nobody, I feel like somebody, when I'm with another somebody, and his name's Justin. Dear Nobody, he's the very best one, he makes life so much fun, and I love him too. Dear Nobody, he's the one I love, and I won't give up, until he tells me to. Dear Nobody, am I a nobody too? am I just like you? Or am I different b/c of him? Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is really good... lots of strong heartfelt emotions in it. i can really relate to it. hope things get better for you |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was an interesting poem. I think I would have liked it better if you had changed "Dear Nobody" to something else, but other than that, it was a good poem. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
smack me in the face why don't ya'... not really. This poem just really hits home sometimes in my life too. This Justin guys has got to be a big part of your life Allysa, I mean for somebody to help you like a somebody has got to be a speacil thing. Great job, and I hope you were looking at that picture when you wrote this. /Nick/ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i thought this was fine. Not the best from you but nonetheless a good read. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks ya all. Actually, Nick, I'm sittin here right now w/ my purse and my picture and a letter he wrote me when we were together. I never leave home without that letter, and I usually don't leave home without that picture. He doesn't know that though. He doesn't know that I carry his picture around in my purse. I wonder what he would say. He always has something to say. Today, he calls me GhettoGirl2001. It varies from day to day. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was very good. theres a book called "dear nobody" also. keep it up Allysa |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i think we have to find this justin guy and give him an award...if this is what he is capable of doing in your life then i think the award is worth it ...thanks for sharing "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This great, and I agree with Cherish... give him an award. I know this kind of feeling.. But nonetheless, great poem! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
nobody is perfect...so therefor if u say u are nobody-your perfect! i didnt like this one as much as i do some others keep writin sis! "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really like this, Allysa! This reminded me of Emily Dickinson's poem "I am Nobody, what are you?" And it also reminded me of a quote: "Nobody's perfect... I'm nobody, therefore, I am perfect". Hehe.. I enjoyed this. Nicely done! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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