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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-07-25 11:10 AM

Sitting in my aunts yard
Waiting to hold you again
I turned my back for a sec
And you then were there
I ran to you and in your arms
We embraced and shared a kiss
And walked back to the house
And sat down in the yard
To talk and hold each other
And make up for lost tyme
Spending the weekend together
In each other’s soft embrace
Plenty of pictures were taken
Of us in each other’s arms
So we could always remember
The happiness we shared
On our weekend together.

(Coincidentally, my new pic is one of the ones of Albert and I taken over the weekend.)

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

1 posted 2001-07-25 12:05 PM

First off, I like your new pic. At least we can see the person in all your poetry! Second, great poem. He must be an amazing guy b/c you make him sound like the best guy on earth. Dont lose him OK?

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2001-07-25 12:49 PM

Tamma,
Nice piece. Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2001-07-25 02:12 PM

Tamma, this is great, and I'm glad you've found a guy that you can count on!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

4 posted 2001-07-25 03:30 PM

picture really added to the visual of this poem, and that seems to have helped the already greatness of this piece. I like how the word tyme was used... caught my eye. /Nick/

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-07-25 03:41 PM

I liked this one. I have felt that lately. It's an awesome feeling. I hope it lasts.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-07-26 02:24 AM

Nicely done here. I enjoyed this one Tamma!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-30 11:02 PM

This was pretty good Tamma

I'm glad you're so happy. I like the pic as well.. nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-08-01 02:41 AM

nice pic...and great job on the poem...i liked it.

"if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry-

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