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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Crowns your pretty face, Eyes of silver gray, Sparkle with the starlight’s grace. Lips of ruby red, Brush against mine, hateless, Flesh of soft silk, Reacts beneath my gentle caress. Kings can keep their gold and silver, Lords their gems and silk. Without them we’ll do just fine. Because, you are The only treasure of mine. "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown [This message has been edited by Kosetsu (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is a really sweet poem.. great job  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Great imagery in this, Adam. It is beautifully written and whoever it is for is very lucky. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great piece. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
If dreams have luck then AF... -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
The description is always there, and I would of actualy liked to see a look on the face of whoever would recieve this. Yet another masterpiece to add to your collection huh? /Nick/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Adam - Yet another that I love. *hugs* If a girl can give you this much inspiration, I'm so happy that it's me. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
What can I say? You've just got that effect on me Jess. I haven't been on this much of a good streak since long before I met you. *hugs* -Adam "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Awesome! The description here was excellent! The first 2 lines of the last stanza stood out (for me)- I liked those alot. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one! I really liked it! Your poems lately have been filled with love and sweetness. I'm liking it  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hahahahhaa..you can really tell when a guys in love huh? good job on this one kose!!!!! keep writing buddy...love is inspirational.. "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was great. very good work Adam. keep it up. Your muse seems to provoke great poetry from you. Regina |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Adam.. you are getting better each post.. keep it up.. ~Jeff~ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was awesome, Adam. The imagery was excellent.. the way you described her was absolutely wonderful. Nicely done, I really enjoyed this. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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