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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-07-24 08:46 PM


1..2..3..4..
C’mon get Ur bodies on the floor
We’re gonna make U feel so right
We’re gonna shake it down,
Break it down.

C’mon girl let’s stop this serrate
I’ve got another game we can play
Just come and dance with me.
( C’mon let me see your body sway )
Lady saw you from ‘cross the floor
Saw you standing right at the door
Never thought it could be so.

1..2..3..4..
Let us break it down for you
Cuz’ this is how we get down,
1..2..3..4..
Let’s push this party through
Yeah this is how we get down.

C’mon girl and party with me
Cuz’ girl you are my ecstasy
So get on the floor with me.
( C’mon let me see your body sway )
Lady our eyes meets all the time
Can glimpse you through the light
Groovin' to the beat alone.

1..2..3..4..
Let us break it down for you,
Cuz’ this is how we get down.
1..2..3..4..
Let’s push this party through,
Yeah this is how we get down.

Welcome everybody
2 the party,
It’s time 2 begin,
Time 2 find the rhythm within.
C’mon let us see Ur body sway
Beautiful honeys the mad funs,
Just begun.
2nd time ‘round nothin’ that can stop us
Gonna show U what we’re made of
Cinderella “boof” (no way)
Hit me one more time. Bang…
Jam on everybody
it’s party time
1..2..3..4..
C’mon get Ur bodies on the floor
We’re gonna make U feel so right
We’re gonna shake it down,
Break it down.

1..2..3..4.. ( C’mon get down )
Let us break it down for you,
Cuz’ this is how we get down.
1..2..3..4.. ( Come get with us )
Let’s push this party through,
Yeah this is how we get down.

1..2..3..4.. ( C’mon get down )
Let us break it down for you,
Cuz’ this is how we get down.
1..2..3..4.. ( Come get with us )
Let’s push this party through,
Yeah this is how we get down.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Tamma
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1 posted 2001-07-24 09:08 PM


This was just AWeSOME...I loved it  

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
Posts 114
Kansas
2 posted 2001-07-24 09:44 PM


It sure put some nice images into my mind, dancing to that music would be nice.... but I wandering, so I thought I'd give a thumbs up to this one. /Nick/
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3 posted 2001-07-26 02:07 AM


Oh God this reminded me of such a dance song haha. I thought you wrote it great...good dance song....but how I dislike dance songs.
Good job though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Hellseyes
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since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
4 posted 2001-07-26 11:39 AM


this is da [edit]...yes two thumbs up...goos write../Drew/

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 08-03-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-07-26 01:42 PM


Interesting, good job.
ITS a change...
reminds of that coolio song..

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."



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6 posted 2001-07-30 11:49 PM


I really liked this... made me want to get down and get to dancing with my bad self!   ok, no.. but I liked this!  Thanks for sahring  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

cutie2005
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Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA
7 posted 2001-07-31 12:01 PM


That was awesome Thanks for sharing!! I really liked it!!
   Always,
     Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!



allie
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since 2001-07-09
Posts 218
Australia
8 posted 2001-07-31 03:43 AM


Very very groovy...  
liked this a whole lot

ALLIE

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