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a.k.a.maLa
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since 2001-06-08
Posts 15
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-07-23 09:34 PM


His words
So soft and smiling
Could purge any fear
The way his voice cradles my insecurities
So warm and firey
To melt the coldest of pains
His essence is my security blanket
His smile could send me home
He took me to the places I never knew
The places where all the veins meet
Snatched up my fears
Shook away my illness
He murdered my doubt
I could fly a million miles in my mind
We collapse and he's yet to run
The future of "together" is...
So unpredictable now
I possess unyielding faith
That if we are meant to shine once more
Fate shall smile down on us
No matter how we're destined to shine
What we share will never be erased
Unbreaking bond of friendship

© Copyright 2001 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
DarkenedShadow
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since 2001-07-23
Posts 114
Kansas
1 posted 2001-07-23 09:56 PM


WEll then in all honesty you lost me for a few in the middle of the poem, but thats okay the whole thing made up for it  anyway. /Nick/
Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
2 posted 2001-07-23 10:52 PM


Awww Jenn I really liked this. Very sweet.
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3 posted 2001-07-24 08:27 PM


I think this is indeed very sweet. I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia
4 posted 2001-07-29 02:25 AM


Beautiful words!  "What we share will never be erased/Unbreaking bond of friendship"  Very sweet... I really enjoyed this!  Nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
5 posted 2001-07-29 06:05 AM


this is really good and sweet.
I loved it!

katie

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

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