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Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

0 posted 2001-07-22 10:50 PM

I stand motionless in your arms
Slowly you smile
I look at you with innocent eyes
And I cannot breathe

You run your hand across my face
Lightly you kiss me
You are intoxicated by my eyes
And I cannot breathe

I walk slowly away from you
Quickly you follow
I look at you with glassy eyes
And I cannot breathe

I'm choking on fear

- Craig you asked me what was wrong.
Bel -

Dylan Poe
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 13
Illinois, USA

1 posted 2001-07-23 09:37 AM

Have missed your talent while I was away! alwayz enjoy reading your work. It's nice to see your still around.

If life's a stage
We write the script
Personality the pen
The final act the final part
We all will meet our end

-Thomas A. Plemmons (TAP2)

Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

2 posted 2001-07-23 11:01 AM

I liked it a lot. I can kind of relate to it. But it was great. Hope to read more posts.

**Sarah

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

3 posted 2001-07-23 11:29 AM

We all have our moments don't we?? I guess yours was an amazing one at that, I propose to see more... /Nick/

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2001-07-23 03:55 PM

Such a sweet poem! There's nothing like looking into the eyes of love, and I'm glad you got to experience it. Great description, my friend. Thanks for sharing.