Teen Poetry #5 |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I left all excited and I came home all sad, Some people there made me happy but most made me mad. For some reason I thought the people there actually would care, Now I'm kind of glad that this was my last year there. Even though all always remember all the awsome people I met, And all the experiences I went through that I'll never forget. The whole week I was there all I could think about was my friends, But as I sat on the railing the last night I didn't want camp to end. I actually got so sad I started to cry, And as I walked to the car the next morning a part of me died. No one who knows me will ever be able to see, How much all those weeks I spent at camp over the last six summers really changed me. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
nice post, we dont have camps in Australia so i cant really relate to it... but still really nice flow, enjoyed it heaps ALLIE |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great, very sad. It tugged and nagged at me...Reminded me of unfinshied responsiilties. good work. keep them coming. Regina |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's never easy, having to face the end of something that has been a part of your life for so long. You express yourself very well with this piece. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
You expressed yourself very well. I went to camp once..hated it. Never went back. HaHa. But I'm sorry you will miss it. I enjoyed the read. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I know how it feels to leave a bunch of friends like you do in camp....more than 6 times.....let's just say I moved a lot throughout my life. Well done on the poem......I enjoyed this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is awesome, Lauren! I really enjoyed this... I know exactly what you're talking about. I go to a WorkCamp every summer, and I wish it was more than just one week. The people are awesome, and the environment is just so... safe. I liked this poem a lot. Hope to see more soon. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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