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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2001-07-21 01:18 AM

The first few wounds
on my arm, leg, and finger
exist quietly there,
- implying nothing

As my fingers run gently
over the skin on my leg
I feel little swelled bumps
and I see red strips
of violence -
mean and unforgiving

"Phoenix"
24 June, 2001

Be kind, be true, be bold, be you.

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-07-21 07:34 AM

Oh my...If this is a personal account I'm so sorry. If you need at all someone to talk to, you can email me anytime.
It is written so truthfully and the ending is really strong.
Thanks for sharing this piece.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2001-07-21 05:22 PM

Yeah it is a personal account, but I'm oke.

Thanks for replying. I appreciate it.

Be kind, be true, be bold, be you.

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-07-22 11:37 AM

This was an awesome poem. more people should read it. Good work. SOrry to hear this was a personal tale...

REgina

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

4 posted 2001-07-22 06:10 PM

A nice short poem. I like this one, DE. Sorry to hear of the subject though. Like AF said, if you want to talk, we're here.

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-24 01:33 AM

Sorry to hear this happened to you. Hope all gets better *hugs*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

6 posted 2001-07-24 05:00 AM

really really deep,
so sorry to hear its about you...

but wonderful peice none the less,

ALLIE

MisguidedMuse
New Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 3

7 posted 2001-07-24 04:41 PM

I love the fact that you can touch so deeply with so few words, what a wonderful poem

~*Nikki*~

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-07-25 07:48 PM

so much expressed in sucha short way...i REALLY liked this poem...and glad to hear that you are ok..now

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-07-30 03:44 PM

I'm glad you're okay.. but I'm still sorry this happened. The poem is well written... powerful in it's simplicity. Nice work.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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