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Lost Friendship |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I once had a friend her name you don’t need to know But something went wrong between us I called her and hung up Because she wasn’t meant to be my friend I guess I know one day when we finally die I’ll see her again We’ll both be happy as we can I wonder will she find a new friend who will listen to her Who won’t leave her when she need’s them the most? Or will I see her crying? I am confused in my life right now And there’s no one who can help me We can mend our friendship There goes another friendship rolling down the hill I cannot catch it anymore Either can she It’s out of sight Happy 18th Birthday where ever you are Minna July 19, 2001 Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Minna...If it's a fight or a mis-understanding or something thats holding you 2 back from being friends- let it go. I'm serious. Never ever ever give up on a friendship...(Someday I'll take my own advice...someday haha) I liked the read. It was nicely written. Not my fav from you- But I liked it all the same. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*sigh*...yea..NEVER give up on a friendship...tough situation...i hope things well, Minna. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
aw this is so sad..i kinda feel like that right now...my phone numbers changed and my friends dont know it yet so they cant call me..thing is is that although i feel kinda lonely right now i dont want to ring them up cuz part of me feels like "hanging up" on them...*sighs*...you know you really should try and find her or at least catch up- bonds like that are worth keeping..  |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
All my friendships never stay they all roll away. I don't like that, I'll try mending this friendship slowly.  Min Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
Min, I liked the poem,sounds like you are in a tough stituation, You will get through it atlesast I hope. ~Hill~ happiness ia a journey,not a destinaton, |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Minna, this was a very good poem. Very sad though...keep looking for her. One day if fate makes it happen or you do ...youll meet again... Regina |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Yup when the time comes maybe we will become friends again. Min |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
**Hugs** I'm sowwie you had to go through this. it's a great poem though. never ever EVER give up on a friend. good luck! I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
thats so sad. i liked the emotion put forth. keep up the great work. i hope everything works out for you. keep your head up. chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
Me and my best friend were fighting a couple days ago .. and I don't think you should go threw life having a grude against someone and not letting whatever happen go, because I mean "what if" that person were to die the next day you would have to live with it. I live by this thing .. *forgive and forget* You can never have to many friends! --Alexia I liked the poem, keep it up chic! If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you? |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
If I only knew what to say or even do with her, she won't talk to her friend Kara. So we figured just let her be and when she's ready she'll talk to us. I hope it's soon, thank you for all your replys, some made me wonder some made me think differently. Like the first reply. love ya, Min Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite sad. It's always horrible to lose a friendship. Maybe you can still mend it. Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
at the moment im mid way through something similar.. it feels like you've noone to talk to when it happens... You say you cant catch it... i can only say how much i hope you realise there'll be people to talk to always... ALLIE |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna, There is only one question to be asked here, "Is she worth it as a friend?" If she is, then you should never give up on her. Hope things do straighten out for you and your friend. *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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