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branden726
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0 posted 2001-07-19 11:14 AM


Its time for humor none of love,
Its time for humor nothing with doves,
Its time for humor so pull up a chair,
Its time for humor so sit on your hair,
Its time for some humor in this place,
All i ever see is a very sad face,
So much poetry about love and hate,
Im beginning to worry about my own fate,
This is a family,
A family of friends,
So pull up a chair and answer my prayers.

Write about love or write about hate,
Whatever you heart says that will be your fate,
Ill write about humor so here i go,
You might want to put down that coke,
Out your nose it will come,
When you hear my little riddles of jokes,
Your screen all full of pop or you keyboard all sticky,
I can guarentee you will laugh at my joke.

What yellow and black and smells like me?
Why would it matter this is a poem not a joke what are you thinking you silly little fool,
I wrote like crap now i write like gold,
im kicking your butt in this rhyme of mine,
It may not be funny but your still reading.


Humor in poetry is the best way to go,
It makes people laugh and brings smiles of gold,
Hate brings tears and so often does love,
Humor i love
Humor i hate
Humor can be anything,

what i ask you is hairy and smells like a monkey?
Well it wouldnt be fair if i told quite yet so tune in next time for a little hint.

(yeah i kinda got thrown off tracks in a few parts but guess what IT DOESNT MATTER i wrote what i wanted to when i wanted to and im getting looser and looser and im figuring what lines match what and heres how i did it)

[This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 07-19-2001).]

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keoni
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1 posted 2001-07-19 11:39 AM


It's cool to liven this place up a little. Your totally right that most of the poetry is very serious. It's nice to open up a post and come away smiling. Good job.
Jon

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"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

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2 posted 2001-07-19 02:33 PM


I like it.  I agree, this place needs some humor every once in a while.  The flow broke in some places, but it's al good.  lol  

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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3 posted 2001-07-19 04:41 PM


LoL i broke that flow in a lot of places but it didnt matter to me i wasnt trying to make sense and i was trying to a sincere poet i was having fun!

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

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4 posted 2001-07-19 09:48 PM


That was cute!! I like this, Branden.  very creative.  The rhyme scheme was pretty well done... an improvement since last time.

As for the riddle.. what is hairy and smells like a monkey?  Well, that's an easy one!  DOPEY!!!  

Nicely done, Branden.  Enjoyed.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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5 posted 2001-07-19 10:01 PM


LMAO@MArie- I was thinking the same thing- Must be Dopey!

As for the poem...I dunno.. I didn't like it much...Ya, I know- Leave it to me to rain on your parade of nice replies. Sorry.  

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6 posted 2001-07-19 10:58 PM


this was a nice poem...i though also..it was creative...great job, Branden

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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7 posted 2001-07-19 11:40 PM


what smells ans is hairy like a monkey?... ...i think we all know the answer to that one hahaha...

nice write...got a bit boring in the middle where you said that you were kickingthe rest of our butts!!!!! LMFAO.... ..

thanks for sharing branden

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8 posted 2001-07-21 03:20 AM


Cherish write about it then dont tell me im trying to get everyone else away from the PAIN!
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9 posted 2001-07-22 01:05 AM


Yup, we know the monkey reply!!!  

Good to see a lighter poem in here. All the love ones are driving some of us insane!  

~AF~

Tearless grief bleeds inwardly.
~ Christian Nevell Bovee ~

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10 posted 2001-07-23 11:48 PM


What's hairy and smells like a monkey?! Well a monkey, of course!!!

Nice poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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