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Mykels_Angel
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since 2001-06-25
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0 posted 2001-07-19 04:24 AM


Let me fly,
I hate it here
I want to try my wings
You know I'm strong,
Don't hold me back
You know you're not being fair
You're not weak,
But you won't be strong.
You don't need me,
But you just can't
Let me fly.

  Lighting, darkness
I am falling from the sky.
I don't feel it anymore.
There is light at the end of the tunnel.
It's not out of reach anymore.
I can feel it on my finger tips, in my toes.
Oozing out my heart
And running through my veins

Let me run through the trees
Let my fly through the breeze.
Let me dance in the clouds,
Let my play in the flowers.

Let me please take your hand
And fly into the clouds,
For your my guy and you know it
And i want far away from here


© Copyright 2001 Sarah Alford - All Rights Reserved
keoni
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1 posted 2001-07-19 11:46 AM


That's  a really nice song. I know how it feels to want to just get away. I think you did a really good job.
Jon

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CwboyAtHeart
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Selah, WA, USA
2 posted 2001-07-19 02:46 PM


That's really good.  Sometimes it really would be nice to be able to just fly away from everything.  Unfortunately you can't and u have to deal with stuff.  Good job.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

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3 posted 2001-07-19 10:05 PM


I agree with Cody here.  I've dreamed about being able to fly.. just being able to fly away whenever and be by myself.  It would be so nice.. I really enjoyed this.  nicely done.  Thanks for the awesome read  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Spice
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4 posted 2001-07-19 10:46 PM


I liked this. I know how it feels to just want to be w/ the person you love, alone, away from people, troubles, worries...life.
Nice song.  

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5 posted 2001-07-20 12:14 PM


nice song...its VERY true...just want to get away from everything...great job on writing it, Sarah

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6 posted 2001-07-24 05:39 AM


I thought this was nice. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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