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Starnite
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0 posted 2001-07-18 06:40 PM


Change of my life

You have brought life back into me
I had a experince with you that was great
One day you found out a secret of mine
I cut myself
You had told me
That if I didn't stop
You wouldn't be friends with me
And wouldn't talk to me anymore
That saying changed me
I stopped and told you
But I didn't tell you was
I loved you!

It's about what my friend Junior had done to stop me from hurting myself.  I thank him for that.

© Copyright 2001 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
Spice
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since 2001-04-13
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Resting in my cardboard box.
1 posted 2001-07-18 07:24 PM


I'm glad Junior had such a positive impact.
Nice write, Star. I enjoyed it.  

stace_co2003
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2 posted 2001-07-18 09:11 PM


this is good. the flow wasn't so great...but otherwise it was good.   thanks for sharing  

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3 posted 2001-07-18 11:20 PM


Hey,

   I am glad things worked out, but personaly I think he is a jerk for doing that. You don't tell someone that you wont be there friend because they cut thats bull. I am glad you go better.

       -- Linc

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Isabel Galaxia
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4 posted 2001-07-18 11:32 PM


Good poem.  It's great you have someone like that.   ..And of course that you've stopped hurting yourself!!!!  

Bel

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5 posted 2001-07-19 01:33 AM


what a great friend.. ...well, im glad that somehow you got out of it...teh endingw a sweet...i liked it, Sarah

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6 posted 2001-07-19 01:50 AM


Junior sounds like a good person. Good to know he stopped you from doing something so bad.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
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Selah, WA, USA
7 posted 2001-07-19 02:31 AM


I liked this.  I'm glad that Junior did something to stop you.  =)  Good write.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Fading Away
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8 posted 2001-07-19 08:48 PM


I'm glad you have a friend like Junior.  You're lucky.  I enjoyed this... stay strong  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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