Teen Poetry #5 |
Change of my Life |
Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
Change of my life You have brought life back into me I had a experince with you that was great One day you found out a secret of mine I cut myself You had told me That if I didn't stop You wouldn't be friends with me And wouldn't talk to me anymore That saying changed me I stopped and told you But I didn't tell you was I loved you! It's about what my friend Junior had done to stop me from hurting myself. I thank him for that. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I'm glad Junior had such a positive impact. Nice write, Star. I enjoyed it. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
this is good. the flow wasn't so great...but otherwise it was good. thanks for sharing I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I am glad things worked out, but personaly I think he is a jerk for doing that. You don't tell someone that you wont be there friend because they cut thats bull. I am glad you go better. -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Good poem. It's great you have someone like that. ..And of course that you've stopped hurting yourself!!!! Bel |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
what a great friend.. ...well, im glad that somehow you got out of it...teh endingw a sweet...i liked it, Sarah im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Junior sounds like a good person. Good to know he stopped you from doing something so bad. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I liked this. I'm glad that Junior did something to stop you. =) Good write. - Cody - |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm glad you have a friend like Junior. You're lucky. I enjoyed this... stay strong --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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