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Blu2lip
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 1

0 posted 2001-07-18 04:26 AM

you are hurting yourself with what you do
i know you hurt but its not what to do
you say its alright you say its ok
but it is what is fading our friendship away

Our friendship is very dear to meeh
I dont know what I would do without it
the only problem is what you do when
im not there to get you through

through all the strugles of each passing day
I tell you what you do is not the way
it is not the way to chase your worries away

what you did on Friday night was not very smart
but I will say this over and over untill it reaches you heart

you are my friend till the end and I mean what I say. I will lift you up and hold you together for you are my friend and we will always be together

I only ask one thing of you that you stop in your tracks and turn the other way.

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This is about my friend who is getting into drugs and alcohol and doing dumb things to solve her problems and that I love her and want to help her

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

1 posted 2001-07-18 04:39 AM

it's so hard when you see someone you love slip into something evil.

I love the poem though.

You talked about her friendship meaning so much to you, and i think give it to her. it should hit home with her.

Sorry to read this,

ALLIE

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-07-18 12:31 PM

I get to be the first to say it. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I hope you like it here.I agree with Allie, you should give this to her if you are concerned. Partying every now and then doesn't hurt, but when you take it to extremes you can ruin your life very quick. I liked the poem. You might want to work on the flow. Sometimes you rhymed, sometimes you came no where close. That might have been for effect, but it looked a little off to me. The poem was good though, I hope to see you around some more.

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-07-18 05:15 PM

Welcome to Passions. This was a very emotional first post. I sincerly believe that if your friend is hurting herself, you should at least attempt to get her help. I know how hard it is to reach out for a friend, but sometimes, you will regret it so much more if you dont.

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tish76
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 3

4 posted 2001-07-18 05:36 PM

this is a great poem. but it hits a little too close to home. my friend has also been getting into drugs and alcohol, so i know a little of what you feel.

peace

Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

5 posted 2001-07-18 06:34 PM

Welcome to Passions!

That was sad and good. Yeah I know how it is my friends are like that. And love them to death. Well welcome again and keep posting.

**Sarah

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-07-18 06:41 PM

Welcome to PIP!

I enjoyed this piece. You are doing the right thing...Whether she gets annoyed or not, don't stop telling her that you love her and wish she'd stop. Nice first post. I hope to see more.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-07-19 01:50 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...

...i can relate in ways...the situation is tough...great job on writing this...as i hope to see you read, share and reply more..bye

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-19-2001).]

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-19 08:27 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

This is a very emotion-filled first post. Very hard situation... I just hope that you don't get yourself wrapped up in that as well. Just be there for you friend... let him/her know that you care. I enjoyed this piece, and look forward to reading more from you soon.

Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-07-23 11:43 PM

Welcome to Passions!!
Great first post and i hope to see you in the future!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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