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Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-07-17 10:15 PM

If I could see you
I’d cry because I haven’t seen you in a while
You’re in heaven now

All I want is you to come back
You don’t understand how much I miss you
Sometimes at night I cry when every one’s sleeping

This is my last year at MHS
I will miss all my friends
I will graduate

I always think of you
There’s never a day that passes me by that I don’t think of you
There isn’t a cure for cancer yet hope is still waiting

You told me never give up on hope
Because a cure for cancer may never be found
But I won’t give up on hope

I sometimes wish I could tell the world how I feel
I want to cry but will there be someone to calm me down?
And tell me it’s okay?

The pain in my heart is never going to mend
You took a piece of my heart with you
Now it’s a challenge for me

Fighting everyday with my disability
Trying not to get in my way
It gets my way with guys

I wish you were here
Helping me with my disability
I’d help you with you’re cancer

Just show me a sign that you still love me
Show me that you are watching me
And I’ll always love you where ever I go in life..

Love,
Minna
July 17, 2001

RIP Mikko Talviharju
2-21-42 to 12-23-99

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-18 12:29 PM

Minna- This was so sad. Made my eyes water.
You really captured your feelings in this one. It's one of my fav. of yours.
And Minna.... There's no need for your Dad to show you a sign- You know he loves you. You're his daughter, of course he loves you and watches over you.He's a really lucky guy to have a daughter that thought so highly of him.

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-18-2001).]

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-18 01:40 AM

The emotion in all your poetry is so strong, Minna... very powerful writing. I REALLY liked this one. You put so much of yourself into this, and it shows with every word. I am very impressed. nicely done.. this is so sad. *hugs* I loved this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-18 11:10 PM

such sadness...i can relate to this feeling...your expression was VERY powerful...strong emotions...i REALLY liked it, Minna

...touching as always...hope things well for you...wish you the best.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-19 01:21 AM

This is really sad. I could feel my heart slowly sinking. Hope all gets better...

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-07-20 10:00 PM

Oh wow, Minna...

Your pieces always make me so sad for the amount of power and heart you put into these are always sky high.
Thank you for this wondeful poem. If anything, it highlights that you should accept everything you have now because you don't know what's going to happen when it's taken away.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

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