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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-07-17 07:31 PM

THE EPITAPH

What will they say?
do you know?
when the lilies
are on my chest
will they be happy
Maybe in this hell
i'm going to
there will be enough
love for me to survive
I'm calling out for help
all i get is the ignored
silence
Where are you when I need
you?
What will my tombstone say?
will they care enough
to give me one?
I'm so cold
shivering
paranoid
im holding out my hand
all i get is being dropped
i lost faith in friends
life, myself
perhaps when someone helps
me off the ground
when that happens I could
smile again

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

1 posted 2001-07-17 07:37 PM

wow!! i totally feel exactly what you are saying. it was very well written. i was just curious as to what made you want to write this. but regardless, it was very good

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-19 01:37 PM

I liked this one Regi! Well done here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-07-19 09:21 PM

Wow, Regi. This is so powerful... your pieces always are so filled with emotion that it leaves me in awe. Beautiful work... onto the next

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-19 10:49 PM

felted this to the heart...i relate...its like my life...so true and real..yet powerful for me...my fave from you..i loved the poem,Ina

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-19-2001).]

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-07-20 10:23 PM

Oh my...This is the best one so far. Probably the connection with it and the honesty did it.

"What will my tombstone say?
will they care enough
to give me one?
I'm so cold
shivering
paranoid"
That gave off this awesome feel when I read it.
You rock! Well done.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

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