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Here's To You
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Here's To You |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Sitting here, all alone. Nothing to do, nowhere to go, no one on the phone. I hate the way I feel, when you're not around, when you're taking a break, it doesn't seem real. So here's to you, hope you're having fun, a toast to you, maybe you've found someone. So here's to you, the one who's not there, a shout out to you, just know that I still care. Is there another girl, someone better than me, someone who can show you, the whole entire world? I hate the way you make me feel alone, sometimes, and I don't know, why I even call anymore, there's never anyone home. So here's to you, hope you're happy now, best wishes to you, hope you'll come back somehow. So here's to you, the one I think about, here's to you, just another shout out. Just a little rant. Feeling kinda lonely at the moment. Justin's not around. He's busy planning the party that I haven't been invited to yet. I got him a present anyway. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sounds like a tough situation...feeling "lonely"..sucks!..  ..well...you will..so dont worry, Allysa  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
i liked this one. being lonely does suck. good job though. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice rant! Doesn't it sucks that the person who is always the break-up-er is always out having fun every second of every day after the breakup, but the break-up-ee is always home, feeling sorry for themselves? Yeah, I can relate to this poem. nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I really like this ALOT! My fav was the "Here's to you" stanzas... I LOVED them!!!  Great write Allysa. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. It sounds sad, but I'm sure everything will turn out fine in the end  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I hold all of my hope in the simple fact that if it's meant to be, it will be. I don't sit around feeling sorry for myself after I'm dumped though. It's just because I dont' have any friends where I live now so there's nothing to do.  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Being lonely sucks... But the poem was very good. Good write about a bad situation. - Cody - |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww this just stinks now doesn't it? I liked the poem tho, it was well written!!! I hope things get better. Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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