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0 posted 2001-07-16 06:51 PM


( Spoken )
Honey there’s no other…
Can’t you see,
How much you mean to me.
I could never hurt you, so…
Let me kiss the pain away,…and
Show you that I’m true.

Baby it’s not a lie
I where with a friend last night
And I’m not denying
I have got nothing to hide.

Honey.
How many times do I have to say ( 3x )
I will love you eternally.

Baby can you not see
That you are the only one
That I really need
No matter what’s said and done.

Honey.
How many times do I have to say ( 3x )
I will love you eternally.

( spoken )
Honey you are,
And will always be
The person that means most to me
If only you could understand…that
I will love you more than that
Cherish every moment with you.

Let me kiss the pain away
Show you that I’m true
Don’t have to be jalousie
There’s no other than you
You’re the love of my life
And that is not a lie.

Honey.
How many times do I have to say ( 3x )
I will love you eternally.
( Until fade )


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1 posted 2001-07-18 01:28 AM


Well done here Hallu!
What a sweet song. I enjoyed it much!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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2 posted 2001-07-23 09:05 PM


This is such a sweet song.  I bet bet she loved it.

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3 posted 2001-07-28 07:15 PM


This is so sweet, Hal!  I really hope you sang this to her.  A guy who sings to a girl is so sexy...   Very nicely done.  I'm really enjoying your songs.  Keep posting!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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