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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-07-16 04:01 PM

I’ve called you a thousand times
But you’re never at home,
Wonder where you are at night
Wonder if you’re alone.
I’m afraid you don’t need me
The way that I need you
Cause everything I do
Is all out of love for you.

If only I could,
If only you would,
Let me love you.
If only I may,
If only I might,
Love you tonight.

Been ‘round you’re house day and night
But you are never there,
I dream of you all the time
Wonder if you still care.
Looking out the window
The rain begins to fall
Wonder if I should call
You’re my greatest love of all.

If only I could,
If only you would,
Let me love you.
If only I may,
If only I might,
Love you tonight.

If only I could,
If only you would,
Let me love you.
If only I may,
If only I might,
Love you tonight.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2001-07-17 09:16 AM

Nice poem! i liked it and more should read so its gonna get bumped.

*Bump*

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 2001-07-17 10:13 AM

This sounds kinda like a song!

I like it, especially the parts that sort of resemble the star light star bright part. Good job!

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

3 posted 2001-07-17 10:19 AM

sax is right, this would make a good song, and i luv the theme of it,
*KiMMiE*

the road to fame is long, and theres no escalator..but dang, ill burn sum calories getting there! hehe

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-17 02:14 PM

"If only I could,
If only you would,
Let me love you."

wow...i relate...the whole song was witha lot of emotions...i really liked it

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2001-07-17 04:10 PM

This was great...I've been in this situation before, and it sux! Hope this isn't about you, tho.

Tamma

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

6 posted 2001-07-17 05:52 PM

i really liked this a lot. i could relate to this. great job i loved it.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-17 06:52 PM

This hit home SO hard! I can relate to this very, VERY much. Nicely done. I really enjoyed this... I hope to see more soon!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

8 posted 2001-07-18 02:34 AM

This was really good. I was truly feelin ya on this one and this so totally deserved to be bumped. Excellent post and thanks for sharing!
Always,
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

9 posted 2001-07-18 04:10 AM

Touching poem.
Can relate to one way love,
often falling into it

Hope you're not in the situation...
However lovely poem,

ALLIE

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

10 posted 2001-07-18 07:56 PM

Wow, I liked this one a lot. I can relate to it... Very good job.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

11 posted 2001-07-23 11:29 PM

Thought i was well done here! I liked this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

12 posted 2001-07-23 11:31 PM

Yeah..nice poem...brings back some bad memories of some of my own experiences though..

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

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