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Once upon a lie
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Once upon a lie |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Two sides to every story And I’ve torn a page of yours It all can seem so black and white When opening closed doors You’re normal on the cover But you’re dusted deep inside So open up your bindings now And show me what you hide A thousand words are meaningless If wraped up in your lies So picture where were headed If you live on in disguise You think you’ve got me going But I read between the lines Your story’s faded from the truth And truth’s what mine defines |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
I loved your poem, It was really good. Keep writing I hope to read more from you. and I also hope that you find someone who is worth reading between the lines. ~Hillary~ Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was a great poem. I can totally relate. The flow was wonderful. The poems was very deep. Keep posting! *Amanda* |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
"A thousand words are meaningless If wraped up in your lies" so true. i like that a lot  Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
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