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Mykels_Angel
Junior Member

since 2001-06-25

Posts 38
australia

0 posted 2001-07-16 03:15 AM

When I first saw you,
I was afraid to meet you.

When I first met you,
I was afraid to kiss you.

When I first kissed you,
I was afraid to love you.

When I first loved you,
I was afraid to loose you.

When I first lost you,
I was afraid to love agian.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-16 03:18 AM

very nicely written there...Sarah

...i liked the repitition and format of your words you expressed it in...enjoyed!

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

2 posted 2001-07-16 03:22 AM

nice poem, i really enjoy poems about love. Also agree with above post, great repetition.

ALLIE

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-16 06:56 PM

So true...It's scary to love again after heartbreak... I really liked this! You wrote down your thoughts very well.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-16 08:58 PM

I agree that it's very hard to trust anyone again after such a heart break. I know the feeling! I enjoyed the poem. I didn't really like the repitition of "you" at the end of each line, but the idea was a good one

I enjoyed this, and looking foward to reading more. Nice work.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-18 03:47 AM

I really really liked this one. Wow, this was a REALLY awesome poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-07-18 08:03 PM

I really liked this one. I like poems about love. I guess I like what I don't have... That I wish I could have that... Oh well, life goes on. This poem was really good, I enjoyed reading it. Good Job!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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