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Just Get Away |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Get away from me, Go away, just go away, You’re always pushing me, Back up, back up, Stay away from me, Just go away, far away, You’re always using me, Back up, back up, Run away from me, Run away, run far away, You’re always testing me, Back up, back up, Back away from me, Just run away, far away, You’re always scared of me. ----------------------- GASP! Can it be that I've actually posted a poem?! Calm your beating hearts, it is true...I have made another poem in our short lifetimes! Anyway, you can thank Stereomud's "Leave" for the inspiration on this one. "Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Hey! jsut had to say I love the poem! "A friend's shoulder makes a |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Nice to see your post! =) hehe I thought this one was really good, I liked it. Good job, keep postin! - Cody - |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Great poem... BTW - What part of AL are you from??? |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I had to say I like this poem. the flow is great, and I just really liked it!! please, keep writing! I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
That is such a great poem...good job  |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Reminds me of another song.. *thinking..thinking...* it's too late  Bel |
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Mykels_Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-25
Posts 38australia |
this is really good keep up the good work! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hahaha...this remined me of a song..called.."bacdafu..."..hahah...anyways...i thought this was nice poem...and im REALLY glad to see you post again, Adam ..see you around.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Hey guys, thanks for the praise. I'm writing this from work, so it'll be short. Jessica, I'm from Ozark, a small town about a 30 miles north of Dothan. You? "Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yer a Mudder? i will be too once I get my new comp and I will set forth to rid of your life force! Mwhaha  I liked the poem. Thought it was nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Hey you! I haven't seen you around in a while. I really liked this. It sounded more like a song to me... anyways, I thought you wrote this very well. nicely done --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
LOL! Nice comment at the end there.  It's a very different piece and for that, it rocks. Go You! Seriously, it was pretty original and I enjoyed it. ~AF~ Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. |
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