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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-15 01:48 PM

Dear Justin:

Although you might not know it,
and you wouldn't because I won't say,
I love you more than anything.

I love you more than my dreams,
which might not mean a lot,
except that they are me.

I love you more than happiness,
which I find in you,
and I hope you'll find in me.

I love you more than the world,
and I love the world a lot,
because then there would be no conflict (hence, no poems for me).

If I had to pick between having everything,
anything I've ever wanted,
and having you, I know what I'd pick.

I'd pick you in a heartbeat,
because with you lies my true happiness,
and without you I could never be.

Although I might never say it,
I love you more than anything,
just remember that.

Alyssa

Okay, this sucks majorly. It's wayyyyy tooooo sappppyyyy!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2001-07-15 02:02 PM

It didn't suck! There's nothin wrong with sappy...

hehe I thought it was very good. Good Job!!!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-15 05:39 PM

I liked the idea of this Allysa...You had some really good thoughts here.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-16 03:25 AM

i enjoyed your thoughts...and your poems NEVER suck...so dont say that...nice job, Allysa

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

4 posted 2001-07-16 04:11 AM

enjoyable,

didnt suck...

Good post,

ALLIE

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-16 08:24 PM

I liked this, Allysa. Although I didn't think it was the best I've read from you, I didnt enjoy the read. Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2001-07-17 11:43 AM

thanks you guys! You're sweet!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-18 02:01 AM

You are just the sweetest. Justin doesn't know what he's missing out on .

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

8 posted 2001-07-18 01:28 PM

Thanks Dopey, you're the sweetest! I want to show Justin what he's missing out on so he'll come back. I have hatched so many evil plans but I haven't put any of them into motion.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

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