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Dean
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0 posted 2001-07-15 12:26 PM


What is Heaven?

What is heaven?
Will we meet again?
You were a friend to all no matter,
what happened in the end.

Why did you leave us?
Where did you go?
You were loved all too much,
to see you go.

Your life was one with much stress,
but all through out it,
you always did your best.

You were taken from us one starry night,
don’t worry we know you didn’t leave with out a fight.

Tonight we shed a tear,
all wishing you were still here.

You truly were a great guy,
it sad en's me that we must say good bye.

We must say goodbye for now,
But we shall meet again.
As for now in our hearts,
is where we keep you dear friend.

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)



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1 posted 2001-07-15 12:29 PM


This was so beautiful and so sad....   good job hun...::hugs::
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2 posted 2001-07-15 12:41 PM


Dean- This was so sad.   *Hugs*
It's hard to let a loved one go.
You wrote about this very well.
Great job.  

CwboyAtHeart
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3 posted 2001-07-15 01:17 AM


Very good poem.  It is hard to have a person die who you are close to...  You expressed that very well.
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4 posted 2001-07-15 04:56 AM


I know exactly how this feels x3.
It's always a sad thing when a friend dies. You just gotta believe that the person is doing great now. My condolences, and great poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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5 posted 2001-07-30 04:58 PM


Beautiful tribute and graciously said.  I applaud you not only for the poem but for the gesture you've done for this person.  Keep it up.

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6 posted 2001-07-30 09:55 PM


;(  That was soooo sad!!!!!  But very well written!!  Thanks for sharing
  Always,
    Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!



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7 posted 2001-08-04 02:07 PM


Very sad topic... But a beautiful tribute to someone who was ovbiously very special to you.  Thanks for sharing this.. I really enjoyed it.  Nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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