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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Would they notice Would they care If one day I'm just not there Im the kid in every hallway The one they call a freak I work real hard to get good grades So that makes me a geek If I drop my books They walk right past Why is it me That they contrast What have I done You're mad at me? Wont you beleive me Can't you see So if one day I don't show up Its because, its my life You just interupt [This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Don't let people make you feel different or bad about yourself. I really liked this. Great write! |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
ruel tho. The ones that treat you that way arent the ones who matter. Dont let them get you down...Great job keep em comin! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Don't worry about what others say. I liked the poem. Good Job! - Cody - |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
keep your head up... the ONLY thing that matters is your opinion of yourself..if you worked hard for your grades that shows effort and accomplishment..be proud  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
oOps!..  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one........I think that you need to be proud of who you are. I'd like for you to drop by the Teen Chat and introduce yourself and get to know people. It will prove to be a great experience and you'll make TONS of friends. Once again, great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Don't let others make you feel out of place or even lower than they are. Their actions already proves then lower than you. stay strong okies? hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You are you... and should be very proud of the fact, because there's no one better that you can be I liked this poem.. very powerful words. Nicely done, I enjoyed the read. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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