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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. 
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Hey guys so I did some thinking and I finally think that I've gotten a lot in my life figured out. For all you who saw my 'leaving for a short while', it wasn't completely about AJ going into rehab, it was a lot of things and the AJ thing set me off. I hope you understood. But I'm back and will be commenting on a lot of poetry around here. I probably missed a lot of good ones. Well here's one I wrote a few days ago... The words sound so angry. I didn't mean to bother you, I didn't mean to get lonely, I'm sorry I had no where to turn. You never tell me where you go. But you always have to know where I am, who I'm with, and what I'm doing. But with you everything's so secretive. I need someone to hold me, Someone to care for me, Someone to listen to me. Don't tell me you love me if you are in the arms of another. Don't tell me you care when you aren't speaking to me over some careless matter. There's no one who can help you Only yourself can do that I would give up my family I would give up my friends JUST TO SEE YOU just to love you I always take the blame. I'm always the wrong one. Are the drugs numbing you?! You got it under control!! Then why can't you stop? Why can't we be happy again? Why are you leaving me? Is this what's best? Stop yelling at me. Just shut the door and go. I do everything for you... Stop blaming me... When it's not my fault. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
I'm glad to see you back!! I enjoyed this free verse, had a lot of meaning and feeling behind it..hope your doing ok!!! CAnt wait to read some more!!  ~Jeff~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this hit me!...wow..emotions filled poem...so much pain...i saw in this one...and WELCOME BACK!!...hope things are ok with Aj and of course you  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
First off, I'm glad you are back. I had just started noticing and becoming a fan of your writing- and then you up and leave. Grrr...hehe Now, moving on to the poem. It was simply amazing. Eye-popping great. The emotions displayed here is wonderful!!! MORE I SAY! |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
Hey Spice! There's plenty more poetry on it's way. I'll add some tomorrow. ALOT of free verses. Hehe they are becoming my new thing. I'm glad you enjoyed my poetry. Thanks!! *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm glad to see you're back I hope all is okay. this poem was well written... very powerful. Nicely done! I look forward to seeing more of you around --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one....like spice said...More I say!....But this time *I* said it Well done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
It's good to see you back again with some more of your wonderful poetry. This one I found especially hard to read. It's too close to home but I still liked it all the same. Thanks for the read... ~AF~ Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. |
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