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Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-07-14 03:12 AM

Sitting, Sleeping, Waiting, Thinking
you're always on my mind.
Eating, Running, Driving, Talking
you're always in my heart.
No matter where I go
No matter what I do
You are always with me.

If I speak, I hear you in my voice.
If I sleep, I see you in my dreams.
With me, you will remain.
Because of you, I sing.
Because of you, I strum.
Because of you, I am me!

You gave me strength, when I was weak
You gave me love, when I would cry.
No matter where I go
Or what I may do
I can't go on without you!

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-14 03:24 AM

strong emotions...i liked how you expressed it...great job...enjoyed it and you written it VERY nicely...

"You gave me strength, when I was weak
You gave me love, when I would cry."

someone like that seems VERY special to have..hope things stay that way, Chels

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).]

Shygirl82
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

2 posted 2001-07-14 03:48 AM

Your mom huh? Sure I believe you...not. Anyways good poem and beautifully expressed and dont worry things will get better or at least I hope so. You know you always have me...whether that makes you feel any better or just makes me sound sad I dont really know but at any rate this was a really good poem and I was feeling it.
Love ya
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-14 09:49 PM

Chelsea I really enjoyed this.
I think you expressed yourself wonderfully!
Sounds like one hell of a person here.
Great write.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-07-15 03:35 AM

Nice writing Chelsea. Everyone has one person they feel like this for. It's good to see you can write about yours.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

5 posted 2001-07-15 03:52 AM

Thank you to everyone who read my poem. It is a truly wonderful person. Good luck in future writings.

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-07-15 05:22 AM

I enjoyed this one. very strong poem here. Very emotion filled.....I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-16 10:54 AM

Lots of emotions here. I really enjoyed this one, Chelsea. You really expressed yourself well. Nicely done

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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