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little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-07-14 02:37 AM

i wonder what it’s like
to have a real life
because all i have...
all i have is strife

to be able to talk to people
and have them listen to me
it must be grate
to feel so free

well back to wondering
back to my strife
back to my...
so called life

well here we go agian back into depression AGIAN!!!!
i just can't seem to be happy for some reason. well hope you like my poem

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

WHEN YOU LIVE, YOU DIE
WHEN YOU DIE, YOUR FORGOTTEN
AND WHEN YOUR FORGOTTEN

[This message has been edited by little_krazy_poet (edited 07-14-2001).]

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

1 posted 2001-07-14 02:52 AM

Matt~
I really liked your poem. I understand about being sad. But writing poetry is making the best out of a bad situation. You are turning your strife into art. It's good too because maybe you'll work through your sadness. I really enjoyed this poem. Hope to read more.
Chez-lee

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!*

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-07-14 03:12 AM

"to be able to talk to people
and have them listen to me
it must be grate
to feel so free "

that hit me home!...i can totally relate to this... simple and straight to the point.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

3 posted 2001-07-14 09:44 AM

thats great!
i really love the way you captured emptiness,

THANKZ,
ALLIE

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-07-14 11:27 AM

Such sadness, such pain...it's not good. I hope everything is ok with you Matt and you better still have my email if you want to talk.
Remember to keep your head up.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-07-14 12:43 PM

this is wicked good. i can relate. nice job though and writing is the best medicine. screw laughter LOL

Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

fairy girl
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 10
*~*Virginia*~*

6 posted 2001-07-14 10:53 PM

sorry about your depression. i hope all gets better for you. be happy!

well, good poem. thanks for the read. :p

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

7 posted 2001-07-14 10:53 PM

Depression bites.... Keep writing- It'll help you out.

Watch for spelling errors- Other than that I liked this.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-17 07:08 PM

Great job here. Wowness, I thought you did an awesome job on this one. I hope you get ok soon though, depression isn't the best of times.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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