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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
The Boy The boy on my mind has been there for months. The boy in my dreams has a very cute smile. The boy that I like "just wants to be friends". The boy that I need is rude to me. So what do you do when all of of these things describes the boy that you're madly in love with? Do you call him up and tell him? Do write it in email? Or do you just let it be that he's a typical male? I'm so confused and lonely too. Because Evan I love you and don't know what to do. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*sighs*...this is a VERY tough situation...i hope everything turns out, ok  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ouch, Ducky. You're not alone here. This happens to tons of people so someone here will be able to give you some jolly advice. It sucks and all but keep your head up. ~AF~ GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs* |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Typical male, eh? Well what this world seems to over see is that there is not by any means more A holes then sweethearts i think the sweethearts like me and dope are all around most girls just tend to pick up the shall i say "cool" boys that are sexy,hot,and got great hair lol well this was a great poem and thanx for letting me express my feelings on this paticular subject... All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked the ending. Really expresses a question many people ask, no only females. Question though: What IS the typical male?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
Thank you everybody for your replies and I am still trying to figure out myself what a typical male is. It seems to me at this moment that a typical male is a jerk who plays girlsm, but things change. Thanks agian!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ouch....that is a bad situation you're in i guess tell him, what's there to lose? good luck and keep us posted  hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Yeah this situation sucks...these was good though. I think maybe talking to him would help. Good luck to ya!! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. this is tough. You say he's rude to you? Maybe he's not worth the time. I'm sorry you're going through this *hug* Good luck. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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