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lilibeelee
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0 posted 2001-07-12 10:56 PM


I keep geting lied to when will this end
I keep geting lied to even from my best friend
I cant take this anymore This is how i feel
Why am I lied to all the time, whats the deal?
If you really love me and care for me Dont ever lie to me  beacuse i can see  
The differnce between the truth and a lie
I can tell by just looking in your eye
Dont think that you will get away with it  
Dont think I am going to stick around and deal with it
Lying is the number one that you can do
To stop me from trusting or likeing you.  You get so use to just one time
You get numb to it u think its not a crime  
You hurt me you hurt others and will contiune
I think you dont relize what it is you do

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 07-14-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-14 03:46 PM


I hope things do strat to get better for you.  I saddens me to se someone hurting as much as you seem to be.  *hugs*
keep your head up and stay strong
Thanks for the read

ps.  I've edited out a part of the poem for PIP guidelines do not allow us to use profanity or hide them with asterisks.  Hope you understand.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 07-14-2001).]

Spice
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2 posted 2001-07-14 11:17 PM


I'm sorry your hurting. Being lied to sucks.
It's So painful. Keep writing- It helps.  

lil_pwheeler
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3 posted 2001-07-14 11:20 PM


I know what its like. they lie and they think me dont know. I can smell bs from a mile away
anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-07-14 11:22 PM


i been there...this is such a tough situation...esp when its from thoses you truly love...hope thinsg gets better for you.

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5 posted 2001-07-15 05:48 AM


Very sad thing going on here in the poem. I hope all improves soon. Good luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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