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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-07-12 10:52 PM




In the middle of the night
In the middle of the night I call your name
It brings me so much joy and peace
Just one word ignites a flame
I've never felt the same

Just to say your name
to hear your name
So soothing and serene
The way it flows
Like my Love for you goes

Just two words are more than what could be said in a whole book
When I call your sweet name
my Megan Brooke

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care...  ~John Lennon
  

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1 posted 2001-07-12 11:00 PM


wow, now this is seriously sweet!!  
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2 posted 2001-07-13 12:01 PM


Aww, that is so sweet!!

Rhonda

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3 posted 2001-07-13 12:16 PM


sweet and beautiful discription of your feelings...i enjoyed it, Ewok

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
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4 posted 2001-07-13 02:53 PM


Someones In looooovvveeee.
HeHeHe
This is a really sweet write.

CwboyAtHeart
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5 posted 2001-07-15 01:26 AM


I like the way you expressed ur feelings...   Good job. Sweet poem.

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6 posted 2001-07-15 05:04 AM


I really liked this one. I thought it was sweet.
I also have to say that your signature rocks.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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7 posted 2001-07-16 10:44 AM


This is SO sweet!!  Wow, I wish someone would write something like this for me.  It really shows the love you hold for her by saying that just hearing her name puts you at peace.  Very nicely done, Ewok.  I Really enjoyed this one.

--Marie

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8 posted 2001-07-16 05:51 PM


Good poem! its so sweet!

You can tell your in love! lol

Alexia

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