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lilibeelee
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0 posted 2001-07-12 10:38 PM


Feelings of Pain locked up inside
Feelings inside that are hard to hide
I don't know how much more I can take
My life feels like a bridge thats about to break
Just when I think my problems are gone
Something happens to me and just goes wrong
I wish I was brave I wish I was stronger
I can't take this anymore not any longer
Sometimes people push me so near to the edge
Each time they push I get closer to the ledge
I want to run away without 1 good-bye
Iam tired of these questions of how come and why
I dont want to deal with this no more
thats why iam walking out that door
No more of this I give up Iam done
Iam tired of this confusion Iam starting to run
Iam doing the best that I can do
My bridge is broken right into two

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1 posted 2001-07-12 10:50 PM


Hey, I know this feeling, it gets better.   I know that doesn't help, but it's true. If you need someone to talk to, just email me k?   ~SEA
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2 posted 2001-07-13 12:04 PM


i relate to this...you expressed yourself nicely...i liked the poem

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-07-13 11:45 AM


Great poem.  It is full of emotion.  I see all of your locked posts, but dont worry, they will unlock soon.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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4 posted 2001-07-15 05:57 PM


I enjoyed this poem muchly. Well done on this one. I hope to see more from u.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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5 posted 2001-07-15 07:25 PM


I know how it feels
Good job
Bel

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6 posted 2001-07-31 11:26 PM


Seems like everyone is having a heartbreak lately
I hope things brighten up for you soon
*hugs*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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7 posted 2001-08-04 02:41 PM


I agree with acire.. this forum is full of lots love.  Thanks for sharing this.. I'm sorry you're hurting.  It'll get better.  GIve it time.  Nicely written poem  

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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