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destiny502
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

0 posted 2001-07-12 11:13 AM

Im cold
my heart beats slow
it is cold
i long for the warmth
of caring eyes
loving eyes
someone to look for me
and i miss you
your touches
your longing gaze
the lust i mistook for love
or maybe it was no mistake
like they claim it must be
i loved you though
there is no doubt in my heart
and i will always have hope in my heart for you
because my heart led me down this dirt path
my body is hurting
my soul is aching
and all i can do is wait

~im definately not any good at writing. all my thoughts just kinda gather into a jumble and make no sense at all~

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

1 posted 2001-07-12 11:50 AM

this is good, glad i had the chance to read it.. take care.

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-12 04:23 PM

i liked your poem, i thouhgt it was good, keep writing! *ab*

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-12 07:57 PM

this poem had a lot of emotions into it...i think you did a great job!...keep writing...i liked it

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-07-13 02:27 PM

Actually Heather, I liked this alot.
I think you showed your feelings well.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-15 05:07 AM

Ok NO! Haha! Your poem was awesome! Your free verse was simply awesome! So much feeling and emotions sent me flying off my 15th floor condo. I am now trying to stagger up the steps to reply to this...how I'm typing I have no idea. THAT'S HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS! haha.....
No but seriously.......well done here. I REALLY loved this poem. Awesome, simply awesome.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-16 10:47 AM

You say you're not good at writing your feelings down, but after reading this I don't believe you! This is an awesome poem. The ending was the best... VERY nice work. I'm sorry it turned out to be heartache in the end. *hugs* Nicely done! I haven't seen you around here much, so I hope to see more posts and replies from you. Nice work, Heather. I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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