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0 posted 2001-07-11 08:41 PM


You are the wonder in my smile
the twinkle in my eye
the whisper in the wind
the fluff in the clouds
the rythm of the rain
the glow of the moon
the softness of silk
the warmth of the night
You are this, and that, and so much more, only to me....


dedicated to J.W

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"And if I say yes, what do I get?"-again the famous cheerleaders

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1 posted 2001-07-11 08:55 PM


very nice  
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2 posted 2001-07-12 02:15 AM


sweet...beautiful tribute ...hope you gave it to him.

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3 posted 2001-07-12 03:43 AM


Awwww this was a really sweet poem for your special friend hehe. Nicely done.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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4 posted 2001-07-12 11:09 AM


No i didnt give it to him, but im gonna, along with a big smooch! hehe thanks guyz

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5 posted 2001-07-12 11:54 AM


Aww...that was sweet and true about your feelings about him.  You should let him know how you feel.  Great post.

**Sarah  

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6 posted 2001-07-15 10:34 PM


This is SO sweet!  Very nicely done.  I enjoyed this.  Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

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7 posted 2001-07-16 12:10 PM


Aww this is really sweet!!! heheh   i liked it!
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