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My Friend
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My Friend |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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My Friend who they took away, Dont let me see him, Not for one day, The day your dad took the plunge, You left me to live with you mom, She doesnt like me, But we've been bestfriends forever, My Friend we will be back together someday, Just to let you know not no one can take you away, Charlie my Friend, Listen to me, Dont let it be, Be my friend for eternity, Never let anyone get in our way, You and me Friends for eternity. P.S. Charlie Bro I love you dude and I miss you I cry at nights when I think about the time we had together and I cant wait till were back together friends forever. All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
OMIGOD! THIS WAS SO SWEET BRANDEN BOY i really liked it...didnt quite understand the part about "dad taken the plunge " kinda confused me but im blonde so go figure... "Like, yeah."-the famous cheerleaders |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Alyssa, my dads friend didnt like his life so he took it himself,  thats all im allowed to say hopefully you can find out yourself what it means now. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
ohhh im sorry  "Like, yeah."-the famous cheerleaders |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Its okay ive grown to live it even tho its hard as he double hockey sticks. All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awwwwwww, Branden!! *hugs u twice* I"m sorry you had to go through somethin like this. great poem though....*hugs again* buh bye sweetie!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.~ |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
*hugz* "Like, yeah."-the famous cheerleaders |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanx guys *Hugz back* All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet...but sad...you did well on expressing this out...great job!...and hope thinge are ok...and i liked the poem  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I remember you writing about your friend as well. I don't recal how your friend died, but I do know that you loved him a lot. I hope all is well with you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
Great poem Branden. *hugz* Sorry you had to go threw that. If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you? |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
LoL hey dopey that poem was called "My Friend" but hey guess what that was an iguana lol this is a real friend and his dad died not him...Thanx for the replies every 1 |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is probably your most impressive poem so far. I believe it carries more emotion than any of your other poems. You seem to be on the right track, so keep it up. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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