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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
"Lost Soul" A girl easy to please, A girl easy to mislead. A girl that is to nice, A girl wo wants to help and give everyone advice. A girl who looks at the world form a bright point of view. Is a girl that looks at all the bright points of you. A girl that is happy on the outside, Is a girl that is unhappy on the inside. A girl that looks attractive,is a girl that feels she's unattractive. When will she figure out that it is her innersoul that is most attractive. A girl who once loved the world and herself is a girl who looks down on the world and herself. Sad but ture could this girl be you? Its easy to forget who we are and what we really want ourselves to stand for. Someday the light will shine and we'll pick back up where we left off. Will the girl who looks down on the world and herself pick up where she left off? ~Wait and see~ To Be Continued.................... Hope you like this one it is alittle different from my last one. Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is really good and very true about girls in our society today. good job. keep writing.  |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
I am glad that one person liked my poem, I thought it was just how I felt, it is nice to know that someone else can feel the same way... once again thankyou!!!!! ~Hillary~ Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sounds like a little soap opera. Will there be a follow up poem for this one? I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
GIRLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!! This poem kicked some booooooty! Yeah, you know it! You are so cute! You crack me up! I really liked your poem and it is sooooo cool that you are posting here because it lets me see a little more of who ya are! Love ya! And please keep posting for me! "Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed the poem...showed truth...and hope to post the continued poem..soon. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I agree w/ Mistic on this one. Nice read Hillary. |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Very true. Very very true. A wonderful poem. I hope to read a followup. Thanx for sharing. *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
I hope that there is going to be another sega, that is what my plan was, hope it follows through..... Thanxs for all the nice comments, I am glad you enjoyed my poem..... ~Hillary~ Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really good.....you got the continuation up yet? hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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