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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Sorry I don't fit into your nice little society Censor Me I speak the truth that's from the heart but you decide to tear it apart Censor Me I speak about issues that we deal with today I want people to know there is another way Help them see, before they decay Censor ME So I write about government and problems kids face and you tell me that it doesn't belong in this place do you tell me that if we turn a blind eye we show grace or is it that the issues I speak of you'd like to erase Censor me I write about anger, about sorrow and moral-decay you thrash it and bash it then, put it another way but I won't lie down to your censorship today Cennsor me I have tried my hardest to be set apart to speak only issues that deal with the heart Censor Me Sorry I don't fit into your nice little society Censor Me um some of you know what this one is about. we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
goodness jimm-ay! you don't give up without a fight do ya? well neither do i  oh you'll see..........robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
jimmy i know what this is about  but you have to understand that this is rons web site and we have to respect his rules....like someone said before (im not sure who) its like going to someone else house we respect the rules they set or they probably wont welcome us there. but yeah it was a nice poem.....well see ya later and hope your not mad at me for saying this.story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I liked the poem. I *don't* know what this is exactly about, but I imagine I can figure it out pretty easily. Anyway, liked the poem, keep writing. - Cody - |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
that was good jimmy. i liked the use of repetition. (jo tries to sound smart). i agree with you, but i also believe in obeying rules and such. but i think talking to them about the problem would be a good idea. cause it doesn't seem like exactly a um, logical decision. jo But His word was in my heart |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I do not know who you are referring to, but I do know that this was a well written poem. Keep up the great work! *Amanda* |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Jenn I'm not mad at you but I am upset that that other poem got blocked, yes it dealed with some "negative" issues but it was asking people to take a closer LOOK to see the signs so that hey could help prevent such a thing, no where in my poem did I promote what the poem was about and I stated that in a note at the end of the poem...I just peoples eyes to be opened so that when She Cries they will be able to help before it's to late. "I'm not asking you to love me I'm just letting out the truth no holds barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say..." Dogwood...I wouldn't be making a fuss about it being blocked if I didn't have good reason and you know that. we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
This is a really good poem, well spoken/ written, whatever. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
yeah i know story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Okay- I'm one of the wonderul people that doesn't know what this is truelly about...hehe...BUT, I love it just the same. The format was nicely done. I really enjoyed this one! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is excellent writing, and yes, this is Ron's place, he allows us to be here. We have to respect him. I think if you have a problem with the guidelines, or about a decision a Moderator has made in regards to one of your poems, you should email Ron directly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Like you, we have to follow the rules. Many people read this and interpreted it to be a glorification and we're sorry but that's not allowed. If you'd like to talk about this further then e-mail me. Anyhow, this poem was nicely done. I liked it and find it admiring that you're sticking with what you're saying, but don't think *I* haven't had anything pulled...it's just something that happens due to the rules.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great format ...and the repitition was very well done!im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Unfortunately, censorship is always there. I'm sorry that you had it happen to you. It's a thin line that sometimes they think is crossed, but it's okay to stand by your decisions and I agree that it's important to go by the rules, too. It's just sad that we can't address things in a different way. Everyone interprets things differently! Oh well this was a great poem. *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I though this was really good...i dont know the whole story but I can basically get the feel of it and yeah the situation sucks. This was a really powerful poem though and I thought it rocked. ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The openingtwo lines to this poem was VERY strong. The whole poem has very strong words, and I enjoyed this very much. As was previously said, censorship is everywhere. The key is learning how to deal with it positively. Nice work. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I understand. All I can do is shake my head or roll my eyes. While I do appreciate this forum and it's people...I know some issues aren't allowed to be discussed, more or less, and sometimes they need to be. *shrugs* Oh well Bel |
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Mykels_Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-25
Posts 38australia |
this is really good keep up the good work! |
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