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Starnite
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0 posted 2001-07-09 11:18 AM


Lucky

I am lucky to have a friend like you
You understand everything I'm going through
Like with boys and life in general
You tell me your problems
I tell you mine
We both listen
I even let you cry on my shoulder
I really want you to know I am here
And I will always be
To go throught things together
And not together
To give me advice about boys
The ones you know
Tell me if their pushy or not or a player
I thank you for being my friend
From not to when ever
I am the luckiest person...
...To have a friend like you!



© Copyright 2001 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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1 posted 2001-07-09 11:24 AM


Aw friendship certainly is a wonderful thing!
sounds like you ARE really lucky to have such a great friend!
Keep Writing

~Jenna-Nicole~

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2001-07-09 02:38 PM


A friend like this is a true find indeed!
Voiceless
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3 posted 2001-07-09 03:01 PM



This is great!
It reminds me of me and my best friend.
besides the fact that we are probably weirder!
Good job!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

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4 posted 2001-07-09 03:04 PM


Awww.  That was really sweet.  I am sure that your friend feels the same way about you!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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5 posted 2001-07-09 07:04 PM


Good to see such a close friendship there. Nice poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-07-10 12:27 PM


sweet and nice...the friendship you protrayed shows a bond that is strong..i hope it stays that way...thanks for sharing it

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Spice
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7 posted 2001-07-10 04:55 PM


Aww that was sweet.
I hope you showed your friend.
Well done.

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8 posted 2001-07-15 08:26 PM


Everyone is lucky to have such good friends.  You're deserving of friends like these - we all are   This is a very sweet poem, and very well written.  Nice work, and thanks for the good read  

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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