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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-07-07 06:03 PM

I am dead,
but have not yet sampled
the sweetest taste of life.
Not yet had,
my first emotion
crushed.
Nor watched my life
be wasted
or flushed.
Not had the power
to throw it away,
or live to the limit,
appreciating everyday.
Not had the chance
to whisper I love you
or find the 8th wonder
blooming in my eyes.
Not a wish come true
or a goodbye to do
nor an apology
with a smiling glee.
I am dead,
but not yet sampled
a taste of my dreams.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-07 11:35 PM

this hit home for me...wow!..i love the way you express this with such images

...i did relate.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-07-08 12:27 PM

The imagery was amazing. I do enjoy your work. keep it up.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-09 01:20 AM

Nicely done here. I did enjoy this one Kim!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

4 posted 2001-07-09 03:55 PM

I liked this one Kim. Keep the great poetry rolling!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-15 05:50 PM

Nicely done, Kim! I really liked this, it showed some desperate feelings. All I can say is be patient. Your time will come. You're young, and have lots to do, and lots to see and feel. Your time for love will come

Nicely done. I really enjoyed this, keep posting your work and sharing it with us

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

6 posted 2001-07-15 07:04 PM

Nice work, I relate and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good work!

May Today there be peace within you.
May you trust God that you are exactly where you are meant to be.
"I believe that friends are quiet angels who

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-07-31 11:22 PM

This is so sad. You will one day be living your dreams. Just wait and be strong for the road towards it is not easy. thanks for the read

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Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

8 posted 2001-08-01 12:50 PM

I really felt this one, good job Kim.

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

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