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stace_co2003
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0 posted 2001-07-06 09:43 AM



Never


I may never see the real you
But I know who you are
You're the one who wants to start off new
who thinks you can't make it very far

You're the only one who thinks you're worthless
Who always puts you down
We'd rather keep you hurtless
For you to always stay around

Though life may sometimes be too much
We're here for you forever
So please don't worry such
Would we ever leave you? NEVER!!!
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This was written 2 years ago in my 9th grade year when me and Kristin were arguing so much....I wrote it for her to show how much me and her other friends care about her.

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
*~!!~*I love Zu!!*~!!~*

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1 posted 2001-07-06 09:56 AM


this is incredibly sweet!!  
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2 posted 2001-07-06 12:26 PM


This is an excellent poem, very well written and I'm sure your friend was as pleased with it as I am!  Keep writing!  

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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3 posted 2001-07-06 11:05 PM


"Though life may sometimes be too much
We're here for you forever
So please don't worry such
Would we ever leave you? NEVER!!!"
This is so sweet!  You're a very good friend.  I hope Kris realizes what a friendship she has here... Nicely done!

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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4 posted 2001-07-07 12:09 PM


First I'm jealous of you and Zu, Now you and Kristin...hehehe
You have the best relationships with people! Thats great!
It's a very sweet poem- I'm sure Kristin loved it.

CwboyAtHeart
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5 posted 2001-07-07 02:44 AM


Aww, I really liked that one!  Actually, I imagine that's how my friends think of me...  Hm.  I REALLY think that's how Ashleigh thinks of me...  I guess I put myself down a lot...  Anyway, I really liked this one.  Thanks for postin!  

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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6 posted 2001-07-07 02:26 PM


This is a really great read and I think that it's very very sweet and I am not surprised that it kept you and Kris together as friends, Well done.

Andrew

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7 posted 2001-07-07 02:31 PM


this was nice..very sweet ...great job! two years ago, Stace

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8 posted 2001-07-07 03:22 PM


I hope that your friend realizes how much she means to you now.  This was a wonderful poem!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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9 posted 2001-07-08 01:17 PM


I liked this a lot. great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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10 posted 2001-07-09 06:47 PM


Good job on this one Stace!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

angel_2401
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11 posted 2001-07-10 10:57 AM


I told you this when you gave it to me, and I'll tell you again, I love this poem, and I'm glad that that "problem" is over with, and we're better friends than ever!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

mistic
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12 posted 2001-07-10 12:56 PM


this is a very well written poem... very sincere
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13 posted 2001-07-19 10:40 PM


Kris is lucky to have a friend like you.  That was a really sweet thing to do.  You have a good heart.  Thanks for the read Stace.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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swimming in fairy floss...........
14 posted 2001-07-20 12:17 PM


this is really very sweet of you stace..im sure kris would have liked it a lot....thanks for sharing this it really shows the sweet and sensitive side of you that we all love..
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15 posted 2001-07-20 11:32 AM


good work, nice poem for your friend.

Regina

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