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Starnite
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since 2001-07-05
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0 posted 2001-07-05 07:36 PM


My 1st Love

I thought I had loved you
You had loved me
We had loved each other
I had talked about you to all my friends
My mom thought it wouldn't work
It did work,
For almost 3 months
You had called me
To break it off so you could be single
When you told me it broke my heart
I had cried my eyes out
The next days were hard for me
To see you and get no hug or kiss
That was when I had relised that I had loved you

I wrote this after my boyfriend called me to break up with me.  And now after what happened I love him even more than when we were together.


© Copyright 2001 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
DancinQueen
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1 posted 2001-07-05 08:13 PM


ohh that quote "you dont know what you've got till it's gone" fits perfectly in your situation. We often take things for granted. im sorry things worked out like this, if its meant to be he will come back to you. in the meantime, keep writing and smile  

ps..it's realize  

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

CwboyAtHeart
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2 posted 2001-07-05 08:50 PM


Aww.  That was sad, but it was very well written.  Yeah, sometimes you don't realize how much you do have until it's gone,and you realize how much love you had.  Too bad you had to find out that way.

By the way, Welcome!

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If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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3 posted 2001-07-05 09:45 PM


*hugs* This is so sad.  I know how it feels.  It's hard to get over, I know... be patient   Keep writing about it, it helps.
Welcome to Passions.  I really hope to read more posts and replies from you soon  

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Melster
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4 posted 2001-07-05 10:53 PM


I remember my first love too...  I felt like you when my heart broke.  But the hurt will pass and you will be fine...  Be strong and dont let him know how much he has hurt you!!

Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

Spice
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5 posted 2001-07-05 11:21 PM


Welcome to PIP Starnite.  
This is a great post. Breakups are horrible, ecspecially when you are the "heartbroken." (Damn those heartbreakers!) Marie is right, writing helps alot. I hope to see more from you in the near-future.  

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6 posted 2001-07-05 11:54 PM


first of all...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...this was a very emotional piece...sad yet sincere...i liked the way you wrote it...hope everything gets better ...as i hope you stay strong.

and...ps...please check your email...i have something to say

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

TopGunLauren
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7 posted 2001-07-06 12:14 PM


Very sad poem but your right people don't appreciate things until they are gone.ut anwya keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more of your poems.
  Lauren

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8 posted 2001-07-06 01:26 AM


Welcome!   This is so sad......I hope it all works out....looking forward to more from you    ~SEA
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9 posted 2001-07-06 01:28 AM


welcome to passions starnite.  this was a good first post, but really sad.  be strong, you'll be alright.  i've always hated this phrase but "there are plenty of other fish in the sea" even if u don't really want anyone right now.  if you need to talk to someone u can e-mail me.  thanks for sharing this.
-fear-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

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10 posted 2001-07-07 03:56 PM


Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this poem of yours. Sounds like a rough situation, but not an uncommon one. Losing somebody you love is always hard to go through. I wish you the best of luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kicking Kim
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11 posted 2001-07-07 05:55 PM


I am pleased that you discovered you were in love I am just sympathetic of the circumstances that you had to find out in. *hugs you*  Keep writing!



^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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12 posted 2001-07-07 06:32 PM


Great work I really enjoyed the read. Well done and welcome to Passions  
Zu

LoneWolf
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13 posted 2001-07-08 01:52 PM


Hey there, well first off let me welcome you to passions. so...uh...welcome. This was a great first post. I know exactly what your going through, the same thing happend to me. Wonderful job on the poem, as i said i can relate to it entirely. Great job, and best of luck to you with everything.

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I've learned that even when you th

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14 posted 2001-07-13 09:42 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Glad to see you join us here.  Happy reading and sharing as well.  DQ has described you situation really well.  Hope you start feeling better.  Be strong.  Thanks for the read and hope to see more of your work in the future.

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