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Man of words.

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Marshalzu
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0 posted 07-05-2001 05:35 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Man of words.

A wizard of expression,
A wizard of expression,
Casting the spells of love,
Casting the spells of love,
Love of a casting wizard,
The spells of expression ,

Wishing words of magic,
Wishing words of magic,
The illusion in your eyes,
The illusion in your eyes,
Illusion of your words,
Magic in the wishing eyes,

Bound within your tears,
Bound within your tears,
Torment of the soul,
Torment of the soul,
Bound within the soul,
Tears of your torment,

Bound within the soul,
Words of your love spells,
Expression of your magic,
Casting tears of torment,
The Illusion of a wizard,
In the wishing eyes.


Zu...

"Here we are again finding ourselves at the end Of the wrong stick I guess it's far too late I'm building up the barricades In my head" -My Vitriol

© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-05-2001 06:13 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

I love this poem Zu!! and I don't think you could be a better poet. you are awesome!! one of the best to me...

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
*~!!~*I love Zu!!*~!!~*

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2 posted 07-05-2001 07:09 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

This was amazing work. Veyr awesome. Youve become an impressive poet, bravo.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

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3 posted 07-05-2001 07:26 PM       View Profile for Spice   Email Spice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Spice's Home Page   View IP for Spice

Oh I LOVED this! I loved how everything came together in the end. Brilliant write Zu!  
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4 posted 07-05-2001 10:26 PM       View Profile for CwboyAtHeart   Email CwboyAtHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit CwboyAtHeart's Home Page   View IP for CwboyAtHeart

I really liked this.  ::shakes head::  how on earth do you do that?!  lol  I don't think I could ever write like that...  Great poem!

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5 posted 07-06-2001 12:15 AM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

I love paradelles!  And you write them so well, Zu!  Wonderful work.  Simply awesome.  Another one for the library!  Nicely done  

--Marie

You canít expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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6 posted 07-06-2001 12:25 AM       View Profile for Suga_Baby   Email Suga_Baby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suga_Baby


This kicks BUTT!!!!!!!!!!!!

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

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7 posted 07-06-2001 01:18 AM       View Profile for fearing-laughter   Email fearing-laughter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fearing-laughter

~mr zu~
hey hey this poem rocked!! i have no idea how u write paradelles..i'd pry get so confused lol.  you did an awesome job on it tho.  yaaaay! tis goin in my library.  
-fear-

emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward

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amazing job here...im sOo glad to see this again from you ...very impressed...the 3rd stanza was my fav...im loving it.

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Beautiful paradelle....for me the ending is the best part of the whole thing, and you did so wonderful on this one Andrew.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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Thanks for all the replies, I really love the paradelle and this is one of my favourites at the moment so thanx for all the replies everyone  
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11 posted 07-07-2001 01:19 PM       View Profile for Kicking Kim   Email Kicking Kim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kicking Kim's Home Page   View IP for Kicking Kim

Wow, this was amazing, the first I've read of your poems but I definately hope to see more.  Keep writing (for our sake!!)



^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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*appluads*
Well done Zu
I've seen your poetry grow
keep it up

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

mistic
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13 posted 07-11-2001 11:56 AM       View Profile for mistic   Email mistic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mistic

really good... I liked the reptition a lot, it was a nice part of the poem.
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Adding this to my library.  
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