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Restless Night |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH 
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As I watch the candle flicker I seem to think of you I hear the rain falling Are you thinking about me? It's dark and my mind wanders My eyes are tired and weary But I can't sleep at all Because you are on my mind I wonder many different things As I lie awake here in this room Things like "Do you really love me?" And "Can this really be true?" But it must be true, my love All I know is of you And how I truly love you With these loving, yet tired eyes So I must close my eyes To sleep a deep sleep I hope to dream of you And the love that we share I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect. [This message has been edited by angel_2401 (edited 07-05-2001).] |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Great write. You showed your feelings very well, I really liked this. I've read a lot of poems you posted, and they're all really good. - Cody - |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
that was cool... i look forward to more of your work... seeing something in rhyme would be cool. love peace and eyeliner laura -x- The road ahead is as long as you make it. Make it worth the trip ~*~jon bon jovi~*~ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Nice read. You expressed yourself well. Very good, Kristin. Very good. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Very well done.nice expression. keep it up. Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*sigh* You're lucky to feel this way. It's quite possibly the best feeling there is. This is a sweet poem.. nicely done  I enjoyed it. Nice work.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet...great expression of feelings ...i enjoyed the read.im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one Kris. Well done here. Beautiful emotions shown.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I enjoyed this was it was a real emotional poem and I found it very easy to relate to!  ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
This was a poem I really could relate to..it's very nice. well written. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Kris I really enjoyed the read Zu |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You are obviously madly in love with this person. Hope things do work out. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Great job with this, for a second I shared your feelings. I hope you keep these feelings of yours. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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