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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
I can't believe all the lies you tell me, And you expect me to trust you. You think i don't know what's going on, But i've known right from the start. I sit on my ass and wait for you to tell me, But you just turn your head. I guess you see me as a toy, that's only gets tossed around. I usually just sit back and let things go, And never really ask a thing. Now this has gone on way to long, It's time to put at stop to this. You play me like a game and take my stuff, Right behind my own back. I swear it's time for you to go, Just take your wicked ways. Let me be free of you and never have to worry, Of what is next from you. This is now thee end of me and you, So get your stuff and say your last good-bye. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Nice write, Michael. It's good you stood up for yourself. Thanks for the read and keep posting.  |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Very good vent on this one...I know how you feel and it totally blows...good luck on the situation... ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Not bad, not bad at all i really liked this one of yours keep it up and keep posting! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Its good to get it out sometimes! Great piece! |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Nice job! Poetry is a great way to just rant about exactly how ya feel. At least here, you dont have to sugarcoat anything, but that may change when you actually speak to this person. I am guessing it is a girlfriend. Am I right?? *Amanda* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Sounds like you just needed a good vent. I don't blame you... This is a pretty good poem. I really enjoyed it, and the emotions running through the piece are strong and powerful. Nce work  Keep posting all your work.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
It a great piece of work!!! **Sarah** |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful...and hope all the vent helped...great job! im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Maynard Junior Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 12IL |
good "^@$% you" poem, i likes "I have nothing to tell you or sell you for the moment... but thank you for asking." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot, but what did she steal? A possession of material essence, or your heart? Nicely done though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I wanna know too, is she stealing? I'm glad you decided to let her go though This person seems to be not trustworthy thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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