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Melster
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0 posted 2001-07-04 10:07 PM



I Just Called To Say I love You
Just Like I've Always Done,
But tonight It seems all different
tonight it seems all wrong.
Please tell me what is happening,
Please Tell me where we went wrong,
I need to know our future,
I need to know for sure.
I love you now as I/ve always done,
But I know that this is the end,
So before you start to rant and rave,
I will walk away and say good-bye!

Hey Guys - Just A short one...  I miss you all and look forward to meeting more of you as my time here does increase once again!!

Love Melz!!  

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

© Copyright 2001 Melanie Heagney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-05 12:05 PM


Simple and to the point.. nice work.  It's good to see you posting again   Nicely done here.  I hope to see more soon.

--Marie

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2 posted 2001-07-05 02:18 AM


Nice Read, Melanie.
Simple and straight-forward...I liked it.

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3 posted 2001-07-05 08:32 AM


Very good. Short, simple, and great. Glad to see you back with us!!

Jenn

"Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody

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4 posted 2001-07-05 11:49 AM


Sometimes the shortest poems are the best! Good work!
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5 posted 2001-07-05 11:52 AM


This was a wodnerful poem.  I too look forward to seeing more of your poetry and to getting to know ya!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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6 posted 2001-07-06 02:29 AM


simple and to the point ...i enjoyed it.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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7 posted 2001-07-07 04:07 AM


I remember when I was a kid.....the first song i could sing.....I was around 1 or so.......some 80's song or something....."I just called to say I love you"....those were the lyrics....yea well just sharing a memory.

The poem was out there and well said melz.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kicking Kim
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8 posted 2001-07-07 01:07 PM


This is the first I've read of your poems and so far I love what I see.  This was a very strong poem and very emotional!  Keep writing!
                

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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9 posted 2001-07-10 08:22 PM


Much appreciated read. Short and easy to grasp.  I liked it a lot.  Thanks for sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

Melster
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10 posted 2001-07-11 11:52 PM


Thanks guys your support has always kept me going and writing further...  I just have to get some more inspiration and I will be back again!  Sorry I am not replying to your poetry, but my time is limited.  I read a lot of them though, so don't be thinking I am not reading them and loving them because I am and I love you all and think you all have a great talent!!!



Love Melz!!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

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