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Ina
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-07-04 05:08 PM




Don't come to me
I'm not willing to
listen to your crap
I'm just not wanting
to be resiponsible
anymore
I need to get away
yes, I'm a coward
are you going to
stone me?
I'm waiting.
DO you think your
words hurt me?
god yes
I have only 3 things
in my life that
are true
my art
my writing
There is no more
pity, forgivness
get out of my way
I don't have time
for you, for anyone
I need to go someplace
far away
not with any of you
don't count on me
because i can count
on you
never could
everything is in front of
your face
I have no patience
for your crap
same as you have no
paitence for mine
you have never done anything to
help me
just lectured
your the kind
of peopless i wanted
as friends.
I bug you
so leave it be
you truley act
like i never existed.
but thats ok
because they were right
all I really had to do
was never open myself
up
i just need to shrivel
away without the light
of hope or happiness.

Regina

The next poems of mine will all be part of "Valley of Fears" which will be a series of poems about lots of things in life.
till the next time.

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-04 10:54 PM


Wow, Regi.  Lots of pain portrayed in this poem.. lots of negativity.  I enjoyed this.  I'm looking forward to reading the next in the series.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

knightlyshadows
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obscured vision
2 posted 2001-07-05 12:13 PM


wow regina. this is great. i cant wait to read the rest of this series. lots of emotion here. i love it. its going into my library. great job here. u told this well. *hugs* hope all is well.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

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3 posted 2001-07-05 10:48 AM


Great work Regina, I really enjoyed the read and I can't wait for the next one in the series...  
Zu

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4 posted 2001-07-05 11:12 AM


good stuff ina liked it looking foward to the rest of the valley poems.

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

zarina
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5 posted 2001-07-05 11:19 AM


what can I say? It's wonderful! I really liked it and surely I look forward to the rest of the Valley Of Fears poems. Thanks for sharing!
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6 posted 2001-07-05 12:10 PM


Ok, maybe it is just me, but what was the third thing ture in you life?  It was a great poem, and I look forward to seeing more of this series!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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7 posted 2001-07-05 12:11 PM


nice job here!
Ina
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Quebec, Canada
8 posted 2001-07-05 06:21 PM


sorry I was writing true love brad. but i kinda skipped thoughts.
thanks for everyones replies, means alot.

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

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9 posted 2001-07-06 02:48 AM


you expressed this very well...i enjoyed the poem ...great job on writing this...as i wait for the enxt.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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10 posted 2001-07-07 04:03 AM


Great job here Regi....I know you're going through some nasty times right now. I really hope you're ok.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kicking Kim
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11 posted 2001-07-07 01:11 PM


Great poem I enjoyed it greatly.  I have read a few of your poems now and I like what I am seeing.  Well until "Velley of Fears #2" Keep writing!



^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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12 posted 2001-07-10 07:50 PM


Hey Ina, this poem is troubling
You sure you are okay?
I'm here to talk to you know
Sorry, if I haven't been available lately
I've just been very busy with work
Talk to me okay?

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

anonymousfemale
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13 posted 2001-07-20 10:16 PM


*gives you a standing ovation*
You are one my favourite writers in here, Regi. You tell everything like it is and truly express your thoughts and emotions. This piece rocked as per usual.

Thanks for the read.  

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

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