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The person |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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The person I Love, The person I adore, The person who will never shut that door, The person who will be there when I am down, The person who will never make me frown, The person everyone looks for, Only few of them out there, All the others just make you frown. The person that holds me, The person who's there, The person who took away all my fear, There is no person exactly like that, There is only few people that can really do that, There is plenty of love but more of pain, This world treats love like a little game, No one knows for sure why we do it, For laughs,giggles,paypacks, but hey thats a wild guess. When I show love its like im a dove, So peaceful, so quite, so much love This piece came from the heart, Mine not yours, I hope you enjoyed it, I know ill enjoy yours. *Tears of love* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Nice read Branden. I liked this. Hehe- The bottom lines were cute too. Glad to see you posting more.  [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-04-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was awesome. I like that the last lines too. for good work. Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was pretty good. I enjoyed the read, and line the ones before mentioned, the last few lines were cute.. a nice way to end the poem. Well done. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thank you all, Im actually back into poetry guys, I took a vacation from the Truth and from my real feelings. Why? Im not so sure myself but im glad im back doing something i love and enjoy so much and thank you all for your replies. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Great read. I guess you truly are loving someone a lot  keep it up and keep sharing thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I liked this one Braden!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this is a really sweet poem, I really enjoyed it. thanks for the read. |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
I really enjoyed your poem, I hope that you keep posting your poems, and if you are worried about being rusty, I seriously would not worry about it!!!! ~*Hillary*~ |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
branden-ive been over your poetry-like all of it- and its all really good! not one bad piece! my entire library (not much of it) has only your stuff and some of dopeys in it i really like ur poetry branden boy keep it up i wanna read more soon ±Åly± "Like, yeah."-the famous cheerleaders |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanx All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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