The conclusion to "The Call" AHHHHH!!!!

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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

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Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-07-03 06:22 PM

Well, I FINALLY got ahold of him, and for those of you who missed the first part, well, go find it! Part 2 isn't as good, but I wasn't trying to write WELL... I was just trying to sort out my thoughts and get them out and stuff. Well everyone, you finally get to find out what happens! Or doesn't happen... Or might...

-Part 2-

And so here she is again,
the following day,
trembling, phone in hand,
wondering what he’ll say.

But, she begins to dial digits
on her cordless telephone.
Sweating palms, racing heart,
she prays that he is home.

Beep... beep... beep...
Just great, the line is busy!
She wishes to get through,
she’s starting to get dizzy!

So she lets the days pass
and today she tried again.
It rang, she waited anxiously,
chewing nervously on her pen.

Finally! The boy is home,
she’s been trying for a while.
When she hears his voice,
she smiles a nervous smile.

They talk for a few minutes,
making small talk and such.
She diverts herself from her goal,
and she misses him so much.

Finally she finds the moment
to say what’s on her mind.
She takes a big deep breath
and asks to hang out sometime.

There is a minute of silence
as the boy thinks it through,
and after minutes of debating,
he decides just what to do.

If the girl calls back Monday
and catches him at home,
if he has no other plans then,
to the movies they will go.

So the girl hangs up the phone
and she’ll pass away the days,
relieved and full of hope
that she’ll see him come Monday.

AHHHHH! I hate boys! (ok ok, not REALLY *hehe*) And their little GAMES! (YES, REALLY)

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

[This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 07-03-2001).]

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

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The Hot Girl From Canada

1 posted 2001-07-03 07:21 PM

awesome poem!!!! I hate the games guys play too your not alone hunny. Anyways i hope everything works out in your favor

Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

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Dartmouth College

2 posted 2001-07-03 07:26 PM

lol....

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-07-03 07:51 PM

Sara, I have to let you in on the biggest conspiracy EVER! "Boys" don't play games. I swear, we really don't. The most of us are just really REALLY DUMB! lol, but I hope you do get to see him, an get his little dog too, just don't beat on him too hard. And if you noticed this is full of sexual inuendo - it is, but just jokes, all of them! Good luck Sara, and good poem too!

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-03 08:01 PM

Maybe the boy isn't a boy at all? Haha...

Anyway nicely done here Sara!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

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5 posted 2001-07-03 08:23 PM

Ugh! Finally! I've been dying to know what happened Sara! Now then , I'm expecting to see a poem VERY SOON about the Monday movie date.

Nice read!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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6 posted 2001-07-04 03:18 AM

nicely said...i enjoyed the poem...the situations were well written...i liked it.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Raven Skye
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since 2001-03-03

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7 posted 2001-07-04 09:35 AM

GOOD JOB!! WOOHOO!!

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

thedarkangel
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since 2001-05-12

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~*~the cutest~*~

8 posted 2001-07-04 02:04 PM

lol sounds very familiar.... except with my guy he's always doing art coursework hehe! great job, i missed the first installment but i got the jist from this one and i think it's great!
love, peace and eyeliner
laura
~*~

The road ahead is as long as you make it. Make it worth the trip ~*~jon bon jovi~*~

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-07-04 10:40 PM

Sara, VERY nice work! I really enjoyed this one just as much as the other one. The flow is right on, and the rhyme scheme is very good. Poetry is the best way of sorting your thoughts out.

Nicely done, here. Hope to see more soon.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

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10 posted 2001-07-09 09:30 PM

Well, you're letting him play the game.
Great narration though.
keep us informed

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Skyfire

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11 posted 2001-07-09 10:30 PM

If he's playin, jsut play right back. I want to know about what happened Monday too (hey isn't that today?)!!! Great conclusion!!

Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

Words_of_Glitter
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since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
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12 posted 2001-07-09 11:45 PM

The poem was cute, but don't waste your time. He obviously doesn't like you if he is only hanging out with you because he has nothing better to do. Can't wait to read the follow-up!

"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

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