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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-07-03 03:26 AM

a minute, split second in time
with nothing more but
the gliding flow of this sea
never ending time warped
unsung harmounic blessings
whispered by the stars
in reverence unadorned by
anything but this aura
of pale light shining
against an epiphany of
sooner or later
cast by the heavens
in speehclessness survey
of all things in this uncertainty

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-07-03 12:35 PM

Hey! Yook took my title!

HOWEVER, even though you took my title, I was pleased to find that your poem was nothing like mine at all!

Good job, but get your own title!!!! *hehe*

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2001-07-03 01:47 PM

oooh this is purdy! nice imagery! great work!
*Pixie*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-03 03:12 PM

Wonderful job, Tiff.
The words you chose were absolutely beautiful. Great imagery here.
I enjoyed this. Keep 'em coming.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

4 posted 2001-07-03 03:14 PM

I think it is interesting to have 2 totally different poems by the same title. It just goes to show how many different poem can be made off of one idea. Great job on your poem.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-07-03 03:30 PM

wonder piece of verse!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-07-03 04:48 PM

I think you did rather well on this one. I liked it tiff. Keep it coming.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-07-04 04:07 AM

beautiful verses here...i liked it TiFF...hope to see more.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-07-04 10:32 PM

Beautiful words here, Tiff. I'm really enjoyed the new style of writing you've picked up. Nicely done here. I hope to see more soon.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-07-09 11:31 AM

I'd love to get a little explanation on this poem Tiff
I'm a little lost
Must be me

*waiting for the explanation*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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