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Linc
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0 posted 2001-07-02 10:47 PM


Raging river,
now placid.

Friendships thriving,
now starving.

What once was there,
now is no more.  

Our friendship,
now ceases.

I stand alone,
no longer with you.

Visions of past time,
fade from my mind.

  When I wrote this I am questioning on of what I though was one of my best friendships and friends. Just wrote it wasn't going for anything just thinking. Thanks for reading.

      -- Linc

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1 posted 2001-07-03 12:22 PM


*hugs* jermaine i already told u wut i thought about the poem and this situtation. just give it time and talk to this person. hollaw at me if ya need to talk. i liked this poem alot. very emotional to me, ive been there. *hugs* love you moochs.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

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2 posted 2001-07-03 12:40 PM


Linc- Don't ever give up on such a wonderful, deep friendship. You'll regret it. Trust me. You'll find very few people that you can REALLY connect with. I liked the poem. No hidden meanings...just simple and honest. Nice read, Linc.
Linc
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3 posted 2001-07-03 11:04 AM


Hey,

    Guys, I  don't plan to   Thanks for the replies

       -- Linc

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4 posted 2001-07-03 04:50 PM


Spice knows what she's talking about. I enjoyed this poem and urge you to try and rekindle all that was with your friend.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-07-03 05:29 PM


Friendship is a rare and precious thing. Its difficult to find, so don't give up on it, ever. You express yourself well. Best of luck!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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6 posted 2001-07-03 09:29 PM


ULI, sweetie.  

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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7 posted 2001-07-03 09:52 PM


I know from expierence not to give up on friendships. But this is really good, and I hope everything works out!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Linc
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8 posted 2001-07-04 10:14 AM


Hey,

     It did, ULI Fading Away   thanks for repling all of you guys

         -- Linc

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9 posted 2001-07-06 11:59 AM


Hey, we all go thru trying times and doubts in our minds.  If it's really a true friendship, it'll survive these times.  be strong.  thanks for the read.

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